RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.80] [Fujino]

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NozomiTohsaka

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So I actually really enjoyed the overall update but the pov was quite disappointing tbh. There's barely any build up for such a big irl scene. Then there's so much dialogue during the actual sex that you start getting bored because asuna just keeps repeating the same thing. The writing was not great for this. Also the sex cg itself was kinda lame, I was hoping for better camera angles at least. I think a mating press like from the battle cgs would have worked really well here, oh well
 
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I went back a little to see what the correct love stats were so inoda is maxed out at 600 and korito has fallen to 875 (The gap is closing) also i read the dialogue a bit closer this time rather than skimming it, ik this is getting rushed towards the end a bit but i cant shake the feeling that things are gonna blow up/get revealed before the game is over, unlike at the end of the game that most ntr games do. asuna's love for inoda is only gonna grow during the rest of the quarantine and she'll most definitely be sneaking off with inoda way more IRL. Also sinon,suguha and liz all seem to know what asuna is doing some even collecting evidence against her, asuna also told kirito that when she returned she would tell him everything. My prediction for this game is asuna is either going to get exposed or come clean and basically tell kirito she doesnt love him anymore or something along those lines then as the player we are going basically be catching asuna and inoda having sex all around the city in the end game, kirito is going to fall into depressed mode and suguha/sinon (maybe liz too?) are gonna swoop in. I still don't see how liz is gonna fall for inoda all i can think is she somehow gets baited into having sex with him to prove a point or some kinda of stupid bet and she loses. Either way next update is in 2 months so hopefully he has plenty of time to flesh things out
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NozomiTohsaka said:
So I actually really enjoyed the overall update but the pov was quite disappointing tbh. There's barely any build up for such a big irl scene. Then there's so much dialogue during the actual sex that you start getting bored because asuna just keeps repeating the same thing. The writing was not great for this. Also the sex cg itself was kinda lame, I was hoping for better camera angles at least. I think a mating press like from the battle cgs would have worked really well here, oh well
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100% agree with everything you said. atp, asuna’s corruption doesn’t even feel like ntr anymore. it’s more like reverse ntr where she’s the one stealing inoda (even though he’s not even in a relationship xD). now i’m mainly just looking forward to liz’s corruption and kirito’s plot with the best girl suguha. so far i’m not disappointed... just hoping something big’s coming up in those plots soon enough (something like the rainy night scene from part 1 for kirito and suguha would be peak, where asuna is busy with inoda and kirito with suguha)
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drag0nf6y said:
100% agree with everything you said. atp, asuna’s corruption doesn’t even feel like ntr anymore. it’s more like reverse ntr where she’s the one stealing inoda (even though he’s not even in a relationship xD). now i’m mainly just looking forward to liz’s corruption and kirito’s plot with the best girl suguha. so far i’m not disappointed... just hoping something big’s coming up in those plots soon enough (something like the rainy night scene from part 1 for kirito and suguha would be peak, where asuna is busy with inoda and kirito with suguha)
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I think the update lacked good dialogue, asuna was just laying there taking it (literally XD) she didn't try to fight back and she barely was saying anything (other than the typical things she already said in fog) felt like it should've been more references to the sex being in IRL than in game(like her comparing it or something like that) . I think she should've fought back a little more to it feels like she is already his although she isn't technically supposed to be yet (but maybe this is a sign that she has fallen for good?) but either way im also still waiting for suguha to make her move
 
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Aniky Light said:
I hope the new character's entrance isn't just to give Inoda a boost, I hope the new character has something to do with Kirito
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Fujino was talking about characters in the plural, sort of. So the intensity of the absurd can reach epic proportions. Fujino can add anyone from harmless Silica to the insane DeathGun from Rafin kofin. Fujino's hands are untied, there is no need to observe the canon.
 
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4-kun said:
Sì, è Charlie che è tornato per mostrare a Kirito come essere un vero cornuto:LOL:
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nah, Eugeo arriva e dichiara il suo amore per Kirito e diventa gay, poi arriva Suguha e dice a Kirito di andare all'inferno, perché ha passato tutti quei guai per niente xD
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but then what's the point of new characters? is it to pin Kirito to the ground while Inoda fucks Asuna in front of him? I hope not
 
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as you have already noticed the statistics are at 0 both cuckito and INODA practically this starts with who gains more affection from Asuna from now on if INODA or cuckito but anyway we already know who will have it, in my opinion I think that from here on each update will be 2 months reaching 1.0 maybe 1.05 or 1.10, as I said before I think INODA travels but Kyoko puts him to work in a branch of her company and later on both mother and daughter travel for a few days and inoda detonates them both.

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